B34T1N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Derelict]

O.K

This song needs to be less repetitive, maybe bring in some bit where the main sound fades out and stays with the drums then some ultra-cool sound comes in and starts playing that tune BUT with some sort of twist in it, i got kind of bored half way through, also, what do you make your songs with?

Mataro responds:

This is just meant to be a loop, ideal for a dark scene in an advanced city. I agree that it can be a little repetitive, but I love that main tune haha :D. To answer your question, I use FL Studio 6 XXL. I'll make sure to stop by your page, and please come back! :D

[Ganics [Club Mix]]

Not too bad

It's not really my thing :P but I'd say its pretty much a good track for this genre, maybe you couldve sliced the drum loop to make it fit a little more, but otherwise it was fairly decent, nice stong kick keeping it together although you maybe could've made your voice sound a bit less like golum XD

[Eternal Melody]

Yo, keep it up

This piece you've made is absoloutely amazing for your first song, most people usually turn out alot worse, I can see you making some good stuff in the future ;)

Karco responds:

Hey, really? Thanks - now I know what they're talking about when artists say that a reviewer made their day. :)

[mario64 file FIXED!]

I'm kinda impressed

I'm interested as to what program you use, could you reply and maybe tell me? i may PM you also sometime, I quite like this, brings back ALOT of memories from when i used to absoloutely love this game on N64 XD but yeah, its kinda spot on, maybe the other reviewer was right about the speed, TO AN EXTENT, it wasn't that bad speed wise, the idea of a remix is meant to be the same tune, but different at the same time, you have accomplished this and no, don't let the conciousness get to you, it doesnt sound like alot of random sounds, i can hear the tune in it quite perfectly, I'm now going to go and 5 this for you :), please reply to this review, and mention what program you use, have a happy new year :)

[BZ's Drum N Bass]

Not really DnB

DnB isn't usually a drum beat with a bass guitar in the background XD maybe you should get a bit of inspiration and try again, I dont want to diss your style, maybe you were trying for something different, if you were, I regret the opinion I made towards this song, its good for what it is though 4/5 :)

BritZombie responds:

Yeah, like I said it was my first go, and I wanted it too stand out a bit more.

Cheers,

[~ first beat ever ~]

Its good for your 1st

Ok, the drums were what you were trying to achieve since you have posted this as hip hop, maybe could've put alot more in there, Try making a full song, a good finish leaves a good impression since its the last thing that rings in your head once you have already listened to the song. Also, most people don't appreciate bad grammar on here, so just to let you know, also, don't expect many downloads, youre still learning, they will come as you get better, I could also help you a bit if you would like to PM me from you newgrounds inbox, its just a choice though, you don't have to :) keep making those tunes, advertise in the advertising thread and have a happy new year :)

WillHump4Food responds:

thnx man, thanks man.to be honest i didnt put alot of effort into it, took me about a week i kept adding details day by day cause i didnt want to loose patience. but ill pm you no doubt i can use all the help i could get

[Unknown Danger]

So, your latest piece

Hmm, not too bad, you could still learn alot more, remember to PM me, ill probably PM you soon so we can get into contact a bit more nd ill teach you a few tricks ;) c ya

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Cool B34T1N erm do I know you by another name? XD lol or has this always been your username?

Thanks for your review!

Peace Out!

Stealth

[Step in da pub]

You could use a bit more

PM me, you could use a bit of help, I'll help you out, also, what program do you use?

[Bring Me The Music]

OK...

...its ok, start seems a lil glitchy, dnno how u put metal with techno and trance, could be cleaned up a bit, well done 5/5 since you tried something new and really, that isnt easy :)

[Secrets and Lies]

Very Good for your first song.

I also have FL and for your first tune this is very good, you've turned out better than I did at the start I think, you have alot of potential from my point of view, if you ever need some help, feel free to PM me and I'll do my best, 5/5 by B34T1N :D!

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Thanks man! I'll remember that sure will PM you whenever i get stuck, at the moment I'm just playing around, see what I can get it to do!

Hmm I feel a review coming on! be prepared!

Peace Out!

Stealth