B34T1N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJR - Running Lullaby]

I like this piece =)

It's good, though short, gives me the feel of running through a cyber world where I am free to do what I like, would be good for a menu screen of a futuristic game =). Review my stuff sometime? Good work, 5'd.

[Midnight Stealth]

Hmmm

Good for ambient, did you use Fruity Loops for this? I think i hear one of the FLs drum loops on there... Contained is it? Also, what do you mean you made it for your lego town? lol. Maybe you can review some of my stuff sometime please? =)

[Phernos]

Hmmm

Well, it's different, I guess you're new to all this so I'd say it's fairly good. What program do you use? The drums sound fairly cool. =), all you need to do now is find some true DnB bass, I still haven't managed to achieve that but i just have a strange style of genre that I do, so I'm fine for now XD, you will more than likely pick one up along the way too. Please could you review some of my stuff? I'd highly appreciate it =), I'll check your progress, I've added you to my contacts =). C ya. ;)

Hex72 responds:

Thanks for the review. It doesn't quite sound like the usual DnB, becasue it turned out to be a jump-up track. Jump up has a slower tempo and a much more powerful beat, but still has the same rythm. I'm annoyed that this track peaks a bit too much, though. I'd delete it and reupload if I could.

I'll take a look at your stuff some time, yeah. :)

[Dance to the beat now!]

Good

This is a nice peace of work, maybe make it a little less repetitive? I made something similar to this whilst practicing one night, never release my practices, mine just went lower in the melody when yours went higher, anywayyyys, its a nice song, good things going on here, =). Bye.

Father-of-Death responds:

that's one thing that's really bugging me on this..... the repetitiveness....

:( oh well

it's ok

it's not like i'm sellin this and gettin somethin out of it....

jus doin it for fun!!!!!!!

[Neptune's Trident (completed)]

There is only one problem with your music...

In your music, you need to find which sounds fit well together, sometimes you had 2 sounds going at the same time which didn't really sound too well together. Maybe you culd've had the melody you wanted but with a sound that fitted in or something.

As before lol, Check out and review my work please?

B34T1N ;)

mistahmoo responds:

Yeah, it's a little hard for me to dictate what goes well with what. I have limited musical experience (especially with electronic music), I played cello for 2 years (hated it) and I've played guitar for about one and a half. As for your music, of course. I'll do that right now :D

[Angel's Demise]

Hey...

I see you're new, so I shall not be harsh, since i know how hard it is when you're new to FL, I've taught FL to some people, so if you're interested, I could do the same for you.
Ways to contact me.
MSN: [e-mail]
Yahoo: bradboneuk2
AIM: saladofdeath
or NG PM.

O.K so onto the main review.

This piece, maybe the main synth need to be not so repetetive, if you get what i mean, it plays the tune over to many times, maybe a deeper, lower, harder kick? it would definetly make your kick stand out, also, make your songs a bit longer, if you choose to contact me I'll teach you everything i know about FL.

Check out and review my work sometime please?

B34T1N ;)

mistahmoo responds:

Alright, I'll keep that in mind. Yeah, I've only had FL for about a week, so I'm nowhere near polished, but I'm working on it. Thanks for your reviews, I appreciate it :D

[In a rush]

All but one thing...

This is a good piece if you want a short loop for a movie, which is what you intended to make this for, correct? all but 1 little note in your main synth, there just seems to be 1 off note pitch and i can tell it from listening to many fast songs. Maybe you could listen to your work a little beat for mistakes before you submit? I don't know, but I do that, and its worked fro me every time. Check out and review my work sometime please?

B34T1N ;)

[Mystery Theme--_--LOOP]

Nice one

This is a good piece, well brought in, you introduced the sounds in a very good feeling way, it fit in very well and also in a way for some reason, I've never heard sounds introduced like this but oh well. I quite like this piece and shall be more than glad to 5 it for you. Review my stuff some time please?

B34T1N ;)

[BanjoTooie TitleScreen [Remix]]

=D

This brings back so much memories, you have it practically spot on, you're a life saver =D I really didn't see any problems with this, what do you make your music with? I really can't think of what you made this with =P

Cannabinoid responds:

FRUITY LOOPS!!!

[*The Escape*]

It wasn't too bad :)

I kinda liked it although maybe it could've been less repetitive sound & tune wise but other than that i didnt find any more problems apart from how long it could keep me locked in.

VGman2005 responds:

Well this was made in mind for use in a game or something like that. That's why it has more of a loop feel to it.