B34T1N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dance to the beat now!]

Good

This is a nice peace of work, maybe make it a little less repetitive? I made something similar to this whilst practicing one night, never release my practices, mine just went lower in the melody when yours went higher, anywayyyys, its a nice song, good things going on here, =). Bye.

Father-of-Death responds:

that's one thing that's really bugging me on this..... the repetitiveness....

:( oh well

it's ok

it's not like i'm sellin this and gettin somethin out of it....

jus doin it for fun!!!!!!!

[Neptune's Trident (completed)]

There is only one problem with your music...

In your music, you need to find which sounds fit well together, sometimes you had 2 sounds going at the same time which didn't really sound too well together. Maybe you culd've had the melody you wanted but with a sound that fitted in or something.

As before lol, Check out and review my work please?

B34T1N ;)

mistahmoo responds:

Yeah, it's a little hard for me to dictate what goes well with what. I have limited musical experience (especially with electronic music), I played cello for 2 years (hated it) and I've played guitar for about one and a half. As for your music, of course. I'll do that right now :D

[Angel's Demise]

Hey...

I see you're new, so I shall not be harsh, since i know how hard it is when you're new to FL, I've taught FL to some people, so if you're interested, I could do the same for you.
Ways to contact me.
MSN: [e-mail]
Yahoo: bradboneuk2
AIM: saladofdeath
or NG PM.

O.K so onto the main review.

This piece, maybe the main synth need to be not so repetetive, if you get what i mean, it plays the tune over to many times, maybe a deeper, lower, harder kick? it would definetly make your kick stand out, also, make your songs a bit longer, if you choose to contact me I'll teach you everything i know about FL.

Check out and review my work sometime please?

B34T1N ;)

mistahmoo responds:

Alright, I'll keep that in mind. Yeah, I've only had FL for about a week, so I'm nowhere near polished, but I'm working on it. Thanks for your reviews, I appreciate it :D

[BanjoTooie TitleScreen [Remix]]

=D

This brings back so much memories, you have it practically spot on, you're a life saver =D I really didn't see any problems with this, what do you make your music with? I really can't think of what you made this with =P

Cannabinoid responds:

FRUITY LOOPS!!!

[*The Escape*]

It wasn't too bad :)

I kinda liked it although maybe it could've been less repetitive sound & tune wise but other than that i didnt find any more problems apart from how long it could keep me locked in.

VGman2005 responds:

Well this was made in mind for use in a game or something like that. That's why it has more of a loop feel to it.

[Derelict]

O.K

This song needs to be less repetitive, maybe bring in some bit where the main sound fades out and stays with the drums then some ultra-cool sound comes in and starts playing that tune BUT with some sort of twist in it, i got kind of bored half way through, also, what do you make your songs with?

Mataro responds:

This is just meant to be a loop, ideal for a dark scene in an advanced city. I agree that it can be a little repetitive, but I love that main tune haha :D. To answer your question, I use FL Studio 6 XXL. I'll make sure to stop by your page, and please come back! :D

[Eternal Melody]

Yo, keep it up

This piece you've made is absoloutely amazing for your first song, most people usually turn out alot worse, I can see you making some good stuff in the future ;)

Karco responds:

Hey, really? Thanks - now I know what they're talking about when artists say that a reviewer made their day. :)

[BZ's Drum N Bass]

Not really DnB

DnB isn't usually a drum beat with a bass guitar in the background XD maybe you should get a bit of inspiration and try again, I dont want to diss your style, maybe you were trying for something different, if you were, I regret the opinion I made towards this song, its good for what it is though 4/5 :)

BritZombie responds:

Yeah, like I said it was my first go, and I wanted it too stand out a bit more.

Cheers,

[~ first beat ever ~]

Its good for your 1st

Ok, the drums were what you were trying to achieve since you have posted this as hip hop, maybe could've put alot more in there, Try making a full song, a good finish leaves a good impression since its the last thing that rings in your head once you have already listened to the song. Also, most people don't appreciate bad grammar on here, so just to let you know, also, don't expect many downloads, youre still learning, they will come as you get better, I could also help you a bit if you would like to PM me from you newgrounds inbox, its just a choice though, you don't have to :) keep making those tunes, advertise in the advertising thread and have a happy new year :)

WillHump4Food responds:

thnx man, thanks man.to be honest i didnt put alot of effort into it, took me about a week i kept adding details day by day cause i didnt want to loose patience. but ill pm you no doubt i can use all the help i could get

[Unknown Danger]

So, your latest piece

Hmm, not too bad, you could still learn alot more, remember to PM me, ill probably PM you soon so we can get into contact a bit more nd ill teach you a few tricks ;) c ya

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Cool B34T1N erm do I know you by another name? XD lol or has this always been your username?

Thanks for your review!

Peace Out!

Stealth